Pitch

The other day I pitched my idea to my fellow peers of Media. Personally It could have been a lot better (presenting) as I forgot to mention some key personnel. However, feedback wasn't too great, something I'll look into and ask a wider audience instead.


Some feedback I recieved: (As i've said not too much primary audience feedback whether thats as it doesnt need improving or what)
- Switch up the idea of going all around the world as far to much $
- Perhaps keep it local or national where then you dont have to green screen which could make it a lot better


Pluses:
- Very creative idea could work well
- Very relaxing, chilled music choice
- Could b very aesthetically pleasing

Dylan here is a man who was a big fan. Dylan enjoys all sorts of music, particularily relaxed music where he can chill to and play games or simply study. Dylan doesn't have a particular favoured genre. However because Dyl has said he enjoys the context this is a plus for me, because it goes to show its not just the visuals that are key. The music also needs to be enjoyable for your audience to stay. And in Dylan I can learn that males of the 17-19 age range may particularily enjoy my product. Something I will produce a study on to further back up this case.