New Storyboard

Here is a storyboard of my new proposed project. There is no sound and the clips wont fill the whole sequence, however, a storyboard doesn't always have to be visual to visual. It can simply be just a prompt for inspiration when filming. I know fully of the top of my head, what proposed shots I wish to do. There will be some complicated shots particularly animation, something I will try with after effects.
So if their are bits that remain unclear or have writing assume they're cartoon scenes with after effects.
This idea is inspired by the last sequence of MGMT - Kids which I feel will work, given my film is essentially meant to be a dream.